there wasn’t much to it
the smell of mornings rain
on a steamy street
a small
piece of torn paper
ripped from from something larger
with a stain
a partial coffee cup ring
tainted by
carelessness and haste
scarred with fragments of
scribbled
sour
sentiments
ripped from something larger
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This is so lovely to read through. I am always in awe of those who can paint such vivid images with mere words. Well done and keep up the good work!
Thank you ❤
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love it
Very beautifully expressed
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I loved this! I just came across your blog and I can’t wait to read more of your work. Keep up the great work! 🙂
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Plus grand et plus profond. I will come back to read your poetry.
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Ahhhh💕 Beautiful !
Nice one
Beautiful! I love it. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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Lovely writing!
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Love your poem and the imagery of it. It is very much alive.
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You do with words Kellie what I try to do with my pencils and brushes! Great work, I enjoyed reading it. Nigel.
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that’s optimistic view.
Beautiful 🙂
Liked the piece its beautiful.
Enjoyed it. Satisfying sibilant ending.
Really nice
Lovely post
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Beautiful one. 🙂
Beautifull concept and well written!
Beautiful thoughts. What did you had on your mind while you wrote this?
I totally love this, well done.⭐️⭐️
Amazing!
Love this. Perfectly captures the moment with words.
How beautiful were the words when all put together, creates another life.
Nice poetry
How beautifully you have put it in words…sad and beautiful.
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What a great piece of art!! It took me a while to understand what i understood after reading this poem..👏👏So beautiful!!
Wow nice
Lovely !
Luv the fact that your writing causes one to pause and really capture the feelings of everything described.
Good Post. Thank You.
Takes loads of courage to write poetry nowadays. Keep up the great work
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This is so beautiful and I love how the image coralates with the words
This would be how I come up with, story ideas – I enjoyed this piece, thank you. 🙂
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So simply written and yet so intense and deep, am always uttered by writings that evoke so much feelings in short sentences writing, so beautiful.
Love it
Nice piece of writing!
Nice post. Thank you
Very descriptive 👌
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Intriguing… I love it!
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Wow…. Deeply moving
Thank you for bringing under the sun a beautiful capture of the ever loving rain…..
This was such beautifully written.
Love it!
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Very nice! I like how the style of the poem reflected the idea that “there wasn’t much to it”
Very well written poetry….😘😘
Great poetry .. keep writing
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What were your feelings when you wrote that poetry?